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Anemones and Shells My Childhood

As I recall my past, it was a sea kissed life summers spent roaming the Rabbit Burrows cradled by dunes, beyond Tramore strand towels stretched out on Woodstown beach soft powdered sand, surrounded by forest adventures in the Saleens, daring quicksand of swimming with dad, high jumping waves falling, laughing in great gulps of salt water free and fearless, in our bare bronzed years It was a sea salted life of wave-washed castles of tide pools, alive with translucent shrimps carmine anemones sucked tight to the rocks periwinkles, hermit crabs, a world of shells baby pink crabs moving sideways over stone textured algae, salted, crisping in the heat our faces stinging with sand and hot sunshine we spent hours with nets, exploring the pools After months and years of living near the sea the landscape became an essential part of me. I saw fuchsia ballerinas pirouette the breeze sea pinks, grassy rosettes swaying on cliff tops rocket, tiny lilac petals with succulent leaves valerian, a candy floss pink, sweetly scented We picked them and pressed them into books I recall my child’s life with a skipping heart when summers seemed to shine eternal The rock pools taught us to treasure nature togetherness bred a strong sense of self a respect for the sea, the taste of freedom when I open a book, I often find a flower and shells - this child is forever combing

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Date: 1/1/2011 11:55:00 PM
Eiken, I think your true eloquence is best displayed in this type of writing. You are one awesome prose poetry person! Luv, andrea
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Date: 12/31/2010 7:08:00 AM
Hi Eiken. How strange that you write of Woodstown and Tramore. Used to live in the first and now live in the latter. There is fantastic imagery painted with words in this. There is a great poet in Wicklow that remind me of your work . Check it out below and let me know your thoughts. A peaceful and joy filled New Year to you and yours. Eamon http://writing4all.ie/writings/poetry/shadows-candlelight-0#comment-75890
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Date: 12/30/2010 7:14:00 AM
Hi Eiken. congratulations on your deserved success in the contest with this fine piece. Eamon
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Eiken in Crystal Wilkin's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2010 8:51:00 PM
that was an exquisite piece, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 12/29/2010 1:48:00 PM
This is truly deserving of the great win in Crystal's "Childhood Memories, Contest, Eiken! Congratulations are in order! Blessings, peace, joy and happiness for the coming New Year and always! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/29/2010 12:35:00 PM
Congrats Eiken on your super win in the Childhood Memories contest... with this exceptional entry and write ... enjoy with luv and a Happy New Year too...
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