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Manly this it is not by your hourglass shape
Like fine wine it starts with a good grape
A first must begin somewhere
Poem do not despair
Critics are
There
Judging stars
With a cross to bear
So fair well while aging here
While they wrap through all the red tape
Manly this it is not by your hourglass shape

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/21/2015 9:39:00 PM
John, Wonderful win.................. SKAT
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John Beam
Date: 10/22/2015 3:35:00 PM
Thanks, SKAT and I hope you day will be wonderful
Date: 10/18/2015 3:12:00 PM
congrats on your win John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Beam
Date: 10/18/2015 4:11:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Congratulations on your win and keep smiling.
Date: 10/17/2015 9:19:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing this one, John. got marked low on spelling. and unequal rhyme. but I really like the message!
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John Beam
Date: 10/18/2015 4:15:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Yeah, I could have done better but I was just having fun with the new form. I enjoyed the contest and form.

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