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And Yet We Ask For More

Musical interlude Beneath the sky a majesty of nature all unending are vistas of great clarity and insight transcending. If we would only see those precious gifts from Thee all life in mystery the sky, the earth, the sea. And yet we ask for more? Break..music There need not be a higher plane for what we have's a rarity the sun the moon the stars above are gifts of great prosperity. If we would only see the precious gifts from Thee all life in mystery the sky, the earth, the sea. Oh dare we ask for more? Break Music *Please try listening to this as you read they verse. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OS0Bz9ob1T4&feature=fvsr

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Date: 2/15/2012 10:12:00 PM
MY own poem Andie..I have rewritten A Mighty Fortress is Our God..these are new lyrics to that music..expressing my view of God.
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Date: 2/15/2012 3:38:00 PM
Hey, Debs. I'm at school computer and can't see the youtube the way they set it up here. is it not your own poem? it's lovely!
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Date: 2/13/2012 6:07:00 AM
what a beautiful lyric
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Date: 2/13/2012 12:51:00 AM
Enjoyed the lines you have posted here Debbie,, and how are you feeling..?
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Date: 2/11/2012 2:57:00 PM
This is beautiful, Debs! I got shivers reading it with the music; as though it was stoking my soul and spirit. The tone and lyrics are softly upending...so true, "oh dare we ask for more?". This puts me in quiet and thoughtful mode. Thanks for sharing! Love, Mikki
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Date: 2/11/2012 2:05:00 PM
Gorgeous. I enjoy this type of music, as well. Is that a dulcimer? Or a harp? I loved "insight transcending" the most. Hope you are keeping busy but not too busy. If interested, you may like to check out my blog on editing. I'd love to hear your take on free verse, as you write it so well. Hugs, Cyndi
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