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And the Winner is

Battered and shaken
The motorcycle limps home
to the finish line.

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  1. Date: 6/16/2011 8:59:00 AM
    Speaks volumes about the struggles in life. Well done. So much captured in just three lines. I was so excited to see your name in my inbox. How are you? Missed you my friend. Blessings to you. Karen

  1. Date: 5/4/2010 3:49:00 PM
    Wow great Senryu Meg. I hope life is treating you better these days and that you and yours are doing well. Thank you so much for your kind comment today. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/30/2010 9:12:00 AM
    Interesting thoughts here in this one. I am not sure if it is a metaphor for something else or not but definitely could be. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 1/30/2010 8:30:00 AM
    moto x? totally unexpected. john

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 9:22:00 AM
    Thank you for your welcome blog comment today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 1/18/2010 5:01:00 PM
    scary vehicles...nice write! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/3/2010 6:36:00 PM
    pretty sure I saw that race, Margaret! cool senryu. Enjoyed- Robert