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And the Leaves Whirl

Leaves spinning and whirling swinging and swaying to the beat of the wind drums pulsating and rapping to their rhythmic jive we dance all of our madness into the darkness together

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Skat A

Date: 12/30/2015 12:20:00 AM

I picture a windy day. I sure love the imagery. Swirling in my mind... The colors are beautiful. **SKAT**

Robyn Campbell
Date: 12/30/2015 10:13:00 AM

XOXO, thanks for reading, sweet friend. XOXOXO

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/29/2015 11:38:00 PM

WOW, the last line is awesome. Love the flow, and show....................... LINDA

Robyn Campbell
Date: 12/30/2015 10:16:00 AM

Thanks, Linda. I heart you and your comment.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2015 2:00:00 PM

I like the rhythm of this one..Very creative way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Welcome to soup..Sara

Robyn Campbell
Date: 12/29/2015 2:08:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. Much appreciated.