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he showed up at her door without a poem in his pocket as if half measures would be good enough as if it wouldn't be a crime to hang her out to dry and break her heart AP: 3rd place 2023 Posted on February 19, 2023

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Date: 2/22/2023 6:29:00 PM
as if ... he dared expect any better.
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Date: 2/24/2023 2:39:00 PM
I'm happy to say it is not based on personal experience...
Date: 2/20/2023 11:15:00 PM
Oooo... This is a terrific poem! Terrific imagery contained in so few words....wonderful :)
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Date: 2/24/2023 2:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Julie ~

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