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And Luke Williams Has Gone Celibate

I hope your holiday has been a good one. Apparently there's been lots of sunshine and that pool is very big and very blue. And you look to be happy enough. The weather here has been okay. Well, it rained all weekend but I stayed indoors anyway, looking through that shoebox of photographs that got left in the wardrobe when you moved out. I found that ear ring in the bottom of the box, that one you lost last year, one of the pair I bought you to commemorate our “first”. I think you still have the other one. And you’d never guess! That band you always liked, the one that played Tobacco Road that night and kept playing it and playing it? I saw in the paper that they’re in town and playing at a pub in Hawthorn on Saturday night. I’ve been wondering if you might like to go there with me. And did you hear that Luke Williams has gone celibate? And he thinks that he deserves a bloody medal.

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Date: 12/23/2013 10:24:00 PM
REd, sure do miss you here. I loved reading all your poetry but you have not put up a new one for a long time. Merry Christmas!
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Date: 8/30/2013 12:54:00 AM
soupmail!
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Date: 7/10/2013 2:48:00 PM
just popping in to give a big HELLO!!! Gotta call the car dealer soon.
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Date: 5/24/2013 5:00:00 PM
The lump in your throat, the hopeful hopelessness, the transparent attempt to bait the hook... Been there, done that. Great poem! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/24/2013 3:49:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 5/24/2013 1:34:00 PM
Red, congratulations on your winning poem... a great "Love Letter" entry. always ~Linda
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Date: 5/24/2013 11:09:00 AM
Many congrats Red xx
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Date: 5/24/2013 9:27:00 AM
Red, I LOVED this because it is so authentic! I was completely taken with this poem from the very start - the charming pre-amble at the beginning, beating around the bush until you worked up the nerve to ask her to see the band. Congratulations on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 5/23/2013 12:47:00 PM
Interesting work..It reads as though one has lost a very close relationship but handling it well..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for your visit by my work..I was hoping that it would make you get up before dawn..Sara
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Date: 5/22/2013 5:36:00 AM
There is no end to your creativity! Honey... you are great <3
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Date: 5/1/2013 11:03:00 PM
hey, is this for the love letter contest? If so , I really like it because it's different than most love letters which makes it GREAT because it is unique! Good to see you posting a new poem, Red. Probably I'll have to do most of my souping in the morning. Luv, Andrea
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