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And It Goes On

I'm clean these days: making a living, no more dope, or love-ins, freak-ins, or think-ins; I play sax, and it's a living, an opposite ocean, nearby to home, relax; and the children play outside, in the cavernous street; and the butter melts over the toasted pie, drips hot onto the traffic problem, the ghetto girls, and into the pale, turquoise sky I'm clean these days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/14/2015 1:59:00 PM
Rather intriguing though! Sombre but sobering. yes, i rather like it! :) john.
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:29:00 PM
So very much in this poem my friend. If it is based upon your life more power and blessings to you ! If it is the poet's imagination spilled out into verse , you again deserve high praise and a solid 7 as its truly well crafted poetry.
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