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And In This Dream

I am walking down a street, and the sweet fragrance of r o s e s brush over me, the flash of a bright yellow daisy catches my eye, tiny flowers b l o o m among brambles, a bird is singing- then I see a door opening and I walk through. ________________ 5 line Contest Sponsor, Rick Parise Eighth Place

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/6/2016 5:42:00 PM

Congrats BW, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2016 11:29:00 AM

constance, dreamy kudos to you for a marvelous win!..huggs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/6/2016 8:48:00 AM

I agree with Sandra, your creative poem makes me want to come along with you:) congratulations on your win:)

Augustus Black

Date: 11/6/2016 3:04:00 AM

I like the arrangement of this wonderful write. Filled with lots of blissful imagination, loved to read this one. Congratulation for the placement.

Sonia Walker

Date: 11/5/2016 6:06:00 PM

Your lovely and imaginative poem makes me feel as if I am walking and smelling the fragrance of the flowers and hearing a happy bird singing. Congratulations on the placement of your fine poem. All the best, Sonia.

Janis Thompson

Date: 11/5/2016 5:43:00 PM

What does the door lead to? I like how you leave the reader wondering. Congratulations.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/5/2016 4:47:00 PM

Lovely dreamlike imagery, Constance, leaving one to wonder what is beyond that door. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandr

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/5/2016 3:32:00 PM

Lovely poem, Constance. Congrats on your win! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/4/2016 2:56:00 PM

- Sounds beautifully ... a beauty to the eye :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beverly Read

Date: 11/4/2016 1:50:00 PM

I love this. The imagery is wonderful and I can see, smell, and feel it all. Thank you for such a beautiful write. Beverly

Chris Green

Date: 11/4/2016 1:47:00 PM

This is so beautiful, such a wispy scene you have created. Sometimes it does feel like that when you look out of the door and really look, not just see. Really nice.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/4/2016 1:44:00 PM

Very nice. I would like to imagine that too :)