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And In My Dreams

my unlived dreams or maybe past lives sprawl before me vivid those elements too slippery for my daytime fingers a mutiny of imagination lusts' games played shamelessly and holy moments of understanding entwined in nocturnal intimation spilling into my undreaming hours - Oh, how I love to dream, and experience an existence more fully relieved the burdens of wakefulness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/12/2012 1:05:00 PM
Very nice imagery. A very dreamy verse that I enjoyed very thoroughly. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/29/2012 5:31:00 PM
Yes, lately my dreams are unlived but then reality isn`t all that great either. Love the touch of insight and letting go in this timeless verse. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 4/26/2012 11:56:00 PM
fantastic imagery. It feels like waking up is to lose a king's crown upon one's head. well played.
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Date: 4/26/2012 11:52:00 PM
Hi, Chuck,, a slippery element.. one can only dream and keep on dreaming... I too don't like my wakefulness... I do day dream alot.. not lusty things.. well maybe.. lol.. I have many vivid, dreams.. great imagination too... enjoyed...always PD
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