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And I Said "please"

Forget the past that you may forgive today For as long as those memories live, so does the pain At times it feels so fresh we break Let judgment pass not upon your soul As in the great tomorrow there will be the bones of adversaries dancing to life As all will stand when He blows the horn Fear the shaking mountain for it isn't the force of the earth that speaks but Gods foot that walks Praise Jesus for his life the only gift we have from our father He showed the greatest love, to never sin And we fall to say we are only human Will this pain ever go away, will my eyes open to see you once again And from the highest point I shout to the vacant crown of bones "help" Dancing skeletons make way to my heart I yell to never be heard, for my voice is mute And all the fallen sing my name, as I have to laid down my flesh And my spirit leaves my bones So long my prayer keeps my eyes open I shall write Let me pen not dry for I shall write of his tribulation Keep the peace upon my head that my eyes may see Let my tounge fast, for food is not tomorrow And our water leaves us to nothing, we walk and sleep among the dead A race we will lose Free me, as I too yell to top my lung and my voice falls still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/30/2010 2:43:00 PM
Wow. While reading I could feel the emotion and almost touch the energy you must have felt while writing this piece. I love it. Keep on writing my friend. Love Destiny
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Date: 9/6/2009 4:45:00 PM
What a beautiful day and what splendid poetry I am reading. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors Eduardo. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:16:00 AM
so beautifully penned--charma
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Date: 9/5/2009 7:42:00 PM
Great advice, bravo, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:57:00 PM
amen brother, we are on the same page, you and i . i can't wait to leave. jhl
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:14:00 PM
Beautiful Eduardo...Raul
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