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And I Dreamed

Abandoned at sea, Tired and forlorn I collapsed on the beach The warm sand my pillow. As the waves tumbled ashore, I fell into a troubled sleep. Sometime that night I dreamed Or so I thought. I watched as Jesus drew near me like a whisper on a breeze And, gently, covered me with the softest blanket of Living Waters.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/23/2014 10:23:00 AM
Oooh. This one demands thought. Covered with "Living Water" I believe means that, instead of drowning you are comforted. On the other hand it could mean that the "Living Water" has brought you to Jesus where you will live forever more at His right hand. Excellent poetry!
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Date: 1/22/2014 7:26:00 PM
living waters, how discriptive.
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Date: 1/17/2014 9:28:00 PM
Nice colorfully descriptive write. The first verse reminded me of "Gulliver's Travels" by Jonathan Swift.
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:28:00 PM
Lovely spiritual write!! xoxo Maggie Mae
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Date: 1/15/2014 10:44:00 PM
It is a very calming and comforting thought, to know that we all have a guardian angel watching over us. A wonderful poem, Margaret!...Thank you for the kind comments on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
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Date: 1/15/2014 6:08:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem Margaret, I really enjoyed it. You write with so much love....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 1/15/2014 12:46:00 PM
- A dream beautiful and deep in your thoughts Margaret - well written in a poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/13/2014 7:59:00 PM
Wow, great poem. The feeling of calmness, from a higher power, deeply expressed in this amazing piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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