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And Along I Come and Sit Beside You

I sit in the darkness until it’s time to play not looking for trouble but it makes it’s way I lay the threads they crisscross and crosshatch they go this way and that I lay the threads so sticky I made them I think they are quite nice I lay the threads that draw you to me at first you find just one then two and then three when you find more you realize you can't move you're really quite stuck trapped you see but go ahead and struggle they'll just bind you further and alert you to me I’ll come see you and touch you then taste you but first we must play I spin you and spin you to make sure you’re held tight then tap you to see if you’re ripe I tell you all would have been fine but you had to come find me to see me to see what I do you see you forced me to do what I do now I do it to you. I feel you then smell you before I bite and when I do it it gives you a fright but not long after you think it feels right you no longer struggle because you feel good as I lick you and suck you I admit I enjoy it except how it turns out sweet bliss in your eyes we've shared our last moment then you’ll leave me forever the only thing left is your taste in my mouth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/17/2014 9:15:00 PM
Eelun Welcome to the soup. This was a very enjoyable piece of writing. The descriptions and imagery used allows the reader to be a part of this tale you are telling. Nicely done. Thanks for the great comment on my Calm Down poem.
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Date: 1/15/2014 8:23:00 PM
Wow, amazing poem Eelun. Deeply expressed with great vision, and imagery. Great choice of poetic flair in your words. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 1/14/2014 8:28:00 AM
Hi Eelun, well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Eelun Phetmoore
Date: 1/14/2014 7:57:00 PM
I really appreciate it Linda. I'm glad you liked my poem. I can't wait to check out yours. This seems like a great family to be a part of and look forward to what the future here holds. Take care as well, your new poet friend Eelun.
Date: 1/14/2014 5:16:00 AM
wow, the best poem i've read this morning. gripping from start to end. love the bite. Eelun,  , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Skat
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Eelun Phetmoore
Date: 1/14/2014 7:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Skat. I'm really jazzed you liked it. I look forward to checking out and commenting on yours. Thanks for the warm greetings. I've only been writing poetry for about half a year and love it. I'm an artist and have been looking for a new outlet, poetry is it. Thanks again, Your friend Eelun.
Date: 1/14/2014 4:39:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Eelun- I choose your first great poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Eelun Phetmoore
Date: 1/14/2014 7:44:00 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome Anne. I look forward to being part of the soup family. I'm kind of new to poetry and have already realized that poets are a breed of their own, one that I am proud to be part of. xoxo Eelun.

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