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And All That Could of Been

the longevity of life This is not fortold forbidden then hidden Long days ago But I would think the world is old For it cry's and moans Like a dying mans soul Unable to make a claim It endures and withers Withering in pain As its children feed On its remains I stand and wonder About lost days Has it all been a waste? In this twilight I turn toword the sun thinking What we could of done Closing my eyes I wait for the end And all that could of been

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Date: 2/22/2010 10:35:00 AM
Many congratulations to you for your poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James
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Date: 2/22/2010 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Reese. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2010 10:35:00 AM
The emotion pours from your words in this piece. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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