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Ancient Eyes

Ancient Eyes Distant eyes of ancient guides blinking in the moonless skies cause me to wonder sleepily do I spy on them or they on me. Slow darkness swallowing the scene lights dimmed across the stage no pirouettes, no curtain calls just hoot of darkness’ seeing owls. Softly does all color drain into a pool of blackened pain curling all in fetal clutch searching for a shadows touch. Silence, bathed in pounding fear, unheard night-steps drawing near senses at the edge of sleep cowering before they weep. Distant eyes of ancient guides blinking in the moonless skies. John G. Lawless A Night Sky contest 3/23/2014

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Date: 4/2/2014 12:23:00 AM
JOHN:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/1/2014 2:25:00 PM
i like the dark imagism of this piece, john... a special kind of moonless sky.. a well deserved win in my contest with huggs!
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Date: 4/1/2014 3:32:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A NIGHT SKY - Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud, John ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2014 1:09:00 AM
Enjoyed the write creating a nice picture and congrats on the win, john
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Date: 3/25/2014 8:36:00 PM
John, great rhythm and flow! I like how you repeated the first two lines at the end. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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