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Ancient Dream

I walk an ancient path of dreams, through sylvan lands with silver streams. Ahead I see the bright moonbeams, behind, the snow capped mountain gleams. Mysterious feelings expose what seems, venerable woods with dread extremes. Air so still tranquility screams. Terror within my soul now teems, no longer sure of what redeems. For Shadow Hamilton's - Monorhyme - Poetry Contest written May 19, 2016

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Date: 9/23/2016 10:21:00 PM
A vivid picture of thrill and fear..Well done in the contest! :)
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Date: 9/23/2016 2:09:00 PM
A lovely Monorhyme filled with mysterious overtones, Fran. Congratulations on your podium win! Sandra
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Date: 9/23/2016 10:54:00 AM
great flow, I always have loved monorhyme :) congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/23/2016 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, Laura! ...Fran
Date: 9/23/2016 6:16:00 AM
Great poem, I like it. Congratulations, Kai
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/23/2016 6:40:00 AM
Thank you, Kai! ...Fran
Date: 5/21/2016 6:09:00 PM
SO NICE to see you won with this one. BIG congrats to you, Francis.
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Date: 5/21/2016 5:45:00 PM
All the senses on high alert! Congratulations, Francis!
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 5/22/2016 5:20:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 5/21/2016 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win Francis. I really enjoyed this. Beautiful! #7. ;)
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 5/22/2016 5:20:00 AM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 5/19/2016 12:42:00 AM
wow, one of THE BEST I have seen in this contest . Impressive work. If it were my contest, I'd rate this one high.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 5/20/2016 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...... I started placing my comments on your poem pages.....Fran
Date: 5/18/2016 11:17:00 PM
A beautiful brevity - adorned poem... very much enjoyable....
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 5/18/2016 11:19:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words Probir.

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