Ancestry

Her memories lost, she can't identify her family from the family albums.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 10/13/2016 6:52:00 PM

Hi Teddy, You described memory loss very well in this one liner. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -)Alexis

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/14/2016 3:47:00 AM

Hi Alexis. Thank you so much for your warm applause, and enjoying my piece!! *^_^*

Lu Loo

Date: 10/13/2016 11:39:00 AM

this is one of my worst nightmares...not being able to recognize my family in my scrapbooks when I am much older...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/14/2016 3:46:00 AM

Indeed it's a situation no one wants to be in, or anyone ever deserves.... Thank you so much Laura, for your kind applause!! *^_^*

Augustus Black

Date: 10/12/2016 8:03:00 PM

Very sad... Stuff... Very well done.. Congratulation.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/14/2016 3:44:00 AM

Thank you so much for your applause, Augustus!! ;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 11:09:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Teddy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/12/2016 5:34:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise. Thank you so much for your applause!!! *^_^*

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/12/2016 11:01:00 AM

So sad Teddy, congratulations on your success...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/12/2016 5:31:00 PM

Thank you for your applause, Charlie!!! ;-)