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Analysis of what was not said

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Analysis of what was not said

the manuscripts are in the head,my dear.
each time we fought,i scribble more.
one day it became arranged
when i was away from you,
and the next day i will publish
my hurt all over you-
in the form of distaste.
you ask why i am always quiet:

i can't let the original fall
into seasons to become snow,
fallen leaves,crisp buds,
unusual flowers i didn't want.

i must plan them,so when it's done-
the mistake is long buried inside
with only cutting edges for an uneasy
hold for you.
you will never find that
manuscript,for i run from you
to hide myself from myself.

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  1. Date: 9/1/2013 7:40:00 AM
    Intriguing write Mr. Hsu xxx

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    Date: 9/1/2013 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. :)