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An Untrodden Path

Dawn in the forest, tiny rainbow like sunrays forming light spectrum, an untrodden snowy path waiting for my first foot print.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/20/2012 6:03:00 PM
Beautiful - love the images of snow when it is so warm here now.l
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Date: 5/17/2012 9:13:00 AM
Its a classic one Kash. Just great one. Love and best wishes..Ravindra
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Date: 5/15/2012 10:33:00 PM
Kashinath, mine are not duplicating. I always go reverse after I post a comment. this assures that I don't have to post again or delete an extra message. I think you figured out the trick too, didn't you? well, I am off to bed now. Back killing me! Goodnight, my friend.
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Date: 5/15/2012 10:14:00 PM
Just beautiful.......(soupmail) Huggs TLee
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Date: 5/15/2012 10:12:00 PM
Just beautiful.......(soupmail) Huggs TLee
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Date: 5/15/2012 9:47:00 PM
I love how you ended yours, Kash, that's so important to have a great ending!
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Date: 5/15/2012 10:53:00 AM
lovely tanka, Kash. Many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 5/15/2012 10:23:00 AM
you are unstoppable, kashi buddy!... touche!...:) huggs!. come visit!
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Date: 5/15/2012 9:39:00 AM
Kash, great tanka, good image you portray..David
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Date: 5/15/2012 9:05:00 AM
very very nice! i love the final line.
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Date: 5/15/2012 8:50:00 AM
this is a great tanka Kash..best wishes
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Date: 5/15/2012 8:50:00 AM
this is a great tanka Kash..best wishes
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