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An Unimpeded View

Foreign, Black, Rainbows, and White. Separated, a nations delusional right? Trust in that, reality it's a grey matter. For these barriers only open minds will shatter. M. Lyn Church July 7, 2013

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Date: 5/21/2016 8:43:00 AM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique..Thank you for entering my Preterition Contest..I am sorry for being so long in congratulating you but things have been happening here that I could not control..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 5/18/2016 4:33:00 AM
I love your metaphorical verse.... Congrats Lyn, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 3/25/2016 8:37:00 PM
Some changes are too slow, point made well Lyn, thanks for sharing, Charlie
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