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An Unhidden Reality

I hate my deeds & everbody hates me It's a fact and I know it I am a burden so heavy I am a curse so dark I am a person , i'hv bones Not just a reason to throw stones

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/19/2013 4:34:00 PM

Dear Fatima, Oh! my dear, I can not believe YOUR deeds were bad enough to be hated so.I have only read 3 of YOUR POEMS and I do not see any evil in YOU.Be kinder to YOUR self. YOUR first 2 POEMS were of LOVE and Respect,Therefore this Write is a falacy.YOU are a Welcomed addition to the POETRYSOUP Family. Fill YOUR Pen with LOVE.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Fatima Hasan Zaidi
Date: 4/21/2013 11:02:00 AM

i will do what ever u will say u made me so happy, my deeds as a student i do not gt good marks sometimes my behavior due to which i m scolded by mama.