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An Unforgettable Affair

A modest frame house, on a large corner lot Is the place where it all began I mumbled, "She loves me, she loves me not" Pulling petals, from the rose in my hand She had flowing black hair, like a wild stallion's mane Her white skin as soft as down She was tall and thin, lips full and untamed With eyes, dark chocolate brown Her smile was bright, voice dainty and light When she spoke, the birds hushed their singing Every wish a command, just to hold her hand In my ears, love bells were ringing We spent a year together, I thought love was forever But soon learned, how quickly love fades Now those memories are gold, cause we turned six years old That next fall, we both started first grade an original poem by Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/27/2016 12:35:00 AM
This is just darling...you certainly have a gift of penning 'genuine smiles' and with a final line that has those smiles positively beaming:-) An enchanting poem, joyful to read :-) blessings, lynn
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/27/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Lynn Marie, I am glad I made you smile. I am also grateful to you for the friendly visits and your valuable time.
Date: 7/13/2016 10:29:00 AM
Hi Daniel. Congrats for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:06:00 PM
Nicr Hm ...Daniel...skat
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/10/2016 2:38:00 PM
Thank you KAT. I appreciate your thoughtfulness.
Date: 7/8/2016 8:03:00 AM
Adorable!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/8/2016 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Ingrid. I'm glad you liked it! I appreciate your time and friendly visit.
Date: 7/6/2016 6:45:00 PM
Aww, that was so super cute it just melted my heart <3
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/6/2016 8:18:00 PM
Thank you Casarah. I hope it made you smile:)
Date: 7/1/2016 8:57:00 AM
Ha ha, I like the twist at the end!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/1/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Richard. I appreciate you taking the time to visit, read and comment and I'm am glad you liked it.
Date: 7/1/2016 4:33:00 AM
This is simply cute, Daniel:) Loved the twist at the end:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/1/2016 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Jo. I appreciate your support.
Date: 7/1/2016 12:51:00 AM
OH!!! What a cute write. I never expected that ending....Read that line twice to make sure. Awwwww....puppy love. I've missed your visits, Daniel. Hope all is well. Hugs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/1/2016 7:23:00 AM
Hello. Eileen. Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate your time, your support and your visits. I'm glad you liked my sordid affair.
Date: 6/30/2016 11:29:00 PM
Daniel, this is truly WONDERFUL for the contest, a winner
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/1/2016 7:24:00 AM
Probably another NA but I appreciate the kindness. Nice to see you Constance, have a great weekend.

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