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An unfinished poem

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An unfinished poem

I am an unfinished poem
A Shakespearen sonnet without a couplet
A six-word haiku
A narrative sans resolution

I am the disconnect between the thoughts you want to convey and vessel that transports 
The vessel that transports them and the mind that receives them
The difference between intent and understanding

I’m an ellipsis living within the space between your most profound thought 
And the blank page
Waking in the union between your happiest illusion and harshest reality
Breathing in the pause between I love 
And you  
I am the unfinished poem
And yet I am so much more 

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  1. Date: 10/10/2012 7:52:00 PM
    Great write. You really had me thinking.

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 7:27:00 PM
    This made me smile and gave me a feeling of hope. To be a work in progress is not so bad. :)