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An Unbeliever In the Woods

The scoffer sat upon his rock. and spied out the ivy and hemlock. He surveyed the surrounding hills, Of the endless ranging catskills. He said, this is all that my senses perceive. Therefore, there is no other revelation to achieve. From here I can see the moon and the stars. But it is obvious to me that there are no cars. But he only had to use his feet, To make his range of sight complete. For a mile or two down the byway, Was a tree-shrouded highway.

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Date: 6/2/2016 11:10:00 AM
This is amazing poetry, the message profound.
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Daniel Carter
Date: 7/3/2016 9:32:00 PM
I appreciate the read harry :)
Date: 4/27/2016 9:59:00 AM
Beautiful rendition of an all too common thought pattern...
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Daniel Carter
Date: 7/3/2016 9:33:00 PM
Yeah, I thought it was beautiful as well ;D>D I kid. Thank you, sir
Date: 4/24/2016 8:09:00 PM
Great disbelieving in a higher power poem. I see the person lack of faith. Or at least that's how I see it. Very well-written
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Daniel Carter
Date: 4/25/2016 6:44:00 AM
Thanks samantha. I think this piece strikes at faith and reason being reconciled, since so many think that they aren't. Science is good, it just doesn't have to scope to discern a God. And there are so many details that I cant hash out here :)-Dan
Date: 4/24/2016 3:42:00 PM
Daniel, there is no escape from urban sprawl. In today's world of hustle and bustle, it seems as if our bucolic lifestyle is shrinking more and more. Even the Catskills have shrunk since there are highways leading up to and through them. Sometimes preservation and greenbelts are a good thing. Creeping development into our parks and wetlands commercializes the pristine beauty of the holdouts. Your poem is an excellent witness to what is occurring. ~ Sonia
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Daniel Carter
Date: 4/24/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thanks Sonia, but this is actually about the question of god, and our reasons for disbelieving in god.

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