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An Ugly World Truth

A faithless entity unhappiness coldly it turns the eyes around coils breeding misery a vice with hate that consumes unconscious reality Crawling underneath a thin veil of darkness hiding within bitterness that licks the wounds As a blindness burns one beggar in hell's soup boils tortured by untruths morally shading absent light Without His Holiness a soul never finds peace just war without hope develops inside the ugliness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/25/2016 6:46:00 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! A most powerful and very compelling write for sure. You've framed this "ugly world truth" perfectly!! TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 10/2/2016 8:13:00 PM
Agree in thought. Well written and beautifully put. God bless. Peace, Love and Joy.
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Date: 10/2/2016 5:10:00 PM
Hi Liam! Wow!This is a most powerful poem,you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very sad but written so very beautifully with truth n' deep caring, understanding and compassion for human rights.And I agree with you in all you say here.Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.All these bad situations around the world really saddens my heart and soul very much.Thank you so much for caring and writing this very excellent,beautiful, great piece here,Liam.A true glowing golden gem!Just awesome!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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