An Smile

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~An Smile~ (Triple Senryu) Everyday just smile Remember life is too short So make it worthwhile An smile is so nice Brings sunshine to anyone It's not hard to smile Even heart be sad Smiling can open a door Spread sunshine in hearts Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2011 June.29.2015

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/20/2015 10:23:00 AM

i smile always and try to smile always, but sometimes heart does not permit me my lovely friend. You have given a good advice my lovely friend. A beautiful poem read from you. Loved always,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/20/2015 8:01:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly BL,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it dear friend.You're always so kind:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/29/2015 3:47:00 PM

- A smile can open many doors, Dorian :) - A sweet and lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/30/2015 2:54:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Anne Lise,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it my dear friend.Sending you love and prayers.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)Hugs!D.