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An Owl Stares Back

A stranger to the naked eye, this ghostly apparition glimpsed within my eyepiece field of view. Scarce in contrast noted, its pale orb stares back at me through gossamer, pale eyes. An Owl betokened here, to mark the grave of an ancient, dazzling sun. That for eons shed its noble rays upon ancient, vibrant worlds— now fast asleep, shivering in the void. I put my scope away, still haunted by this specter, within the Greater Bear careening. N/A, 6/12/19, Nifty Named Nebula’s

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Date: 2/15/2020 1:43:00 PM
I found this poem to be very interesting from the point of view of it's unique perspective... Loved the stellar imagery as well... A wonderful piece of poetry Mark!
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Date: 6/27/2019 9:25:00 AM
Enjoyed this Mark, well done!
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Mark Peterson
Date: 6/27/2019 9:35:00 AM
Thank you, John: a privilege to enter your contest and an honor to place. Do it again!
Date: 6/13/2019 6:51:00 PM
It's so wonderful that you can take photos of these kinds of things as you told me at MY nebula poem . You should use this in the N/A Contest. That is what I am going to do with mine! Your writing here was awesome.
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Date: 6/12/2019 8:46:00 PM
This is wonderful Mark! I believe this was not chosen because you didn't put the # of picture of the Nebula you chose. I told two other people to make sure they put the # with their entry. I was very surprised to get on the winning list because the competition was really superb! : ) xxoo
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Mark Peterson
Date: 6/12/2019 11:01:00 PM
Connie, you are so extra special. I am always surprised when I can publish a poem, as I don’t think I have any more in me, but I’ll keep trying, thanks to a few poets’ support. Check out Lawrence Sharpe’s work. (Below) I think you’ll enjoy it. A lot like mine.
Date: 6/11/2019 11:26:00 PM
The mood of this poem is quite captivating, and your use of words is perfectly managed and endlessly poetic, Mark. Great write.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 6/12/2019 11:03:00 PM
Lawrence you are such a treasure to me. You apprehend my verse so well and respond in the most cogent and coherent fashion. Thanks!

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