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An Opportunity

I can see through your eyes Into the back of your head The words that were on your mind Are left there for dead I can hear a time bomb ticking Near our feelings, as they dance Until their end has come Until I lose my chance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/21/2009 9:50:00 PM
I like this one, a lot, it feels like there's a lot of emotion here. This is a great write, good job
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