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An Open Verse

Will my verse reach your ear can your eye stay the course Does unconvention confound the rhythm of your eyes Take a deep breath exhale and read between my lines unphased by phrase and habitude or human voice The choice is always yours if my poem will be or is not to be a tune upon your ear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/6/2012 4:14:00 PM
Clever and grand. A great enjoyment
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Date: 3/6/2012 3:53:00 PM
I really like the way you write, Brian. Thanks for my placement in your 1-8 contest. I am thrilled.
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:05:00 AM
I really like this, Brian. I like the your style and wording. This is going in my favs. love, Kim
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:27:00 AM
nicely written....great visual display!
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Date: 3/6/2012 4:35:00 AM
Well done Brian. - oxox Anne-Lise
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