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An Open Door

I walk in starlight’s drizzle, sprinkling softly on my head. But within I wield a chisel, wresting poetry instead. Unhindered by the test of time, my plan through acquisition to succeed. But life has been an upward climb. Enforced restraint was guaranteed. Whether young or old a struggle— angelic memories vanished. Transcripts all amuddle— my status polyannished. Still I’ve found a myriad ways that I might love myself. Avoided chasing worldly praise— good enough all by Itself. Now there is a yearning to terminate the search. Content with all my learning— None who would besmirch. A multitude surrounds me. Ahead effulgent glow. Some are stolid, some agree— to stay behind or go. Would you have a liar, or one who tells the truth? One who can inspire, or one inclined to sleuth? As for me at journey’s end, I’m searching for the open door. And walking through I might transcend, for just beyond, there’s more. I walk in starlight’s drizzle, sprinkling softly on my head. I’ve tossed aside the chisel, seeking higher realms instead.

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Date: 4/3/2020 3:29:00 PM
Hello Mark, I like this a lot I saw your comment To Carolyn and thought I'd drop by; Its not a Pretentious piece as I read it, I value the use of The chisel metaphor, and the only metaphor As I see in here, that leads onto you reaching Out for a more effective means of acquiring Renewal, indeed a write suffused in the right Richness of effortless poetic expression'
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Mark Peterson
Date: 4/3/2020 7:08:00 PM
Joe, you truly honor me with your comment, which, in its own right, is poetry as deftly crafted as any seen here on the soup.
Date: 1/29/2020 4:30:00 PM
I wonder if the starlight's drizzle was light rain or moist night air. On such a walk, you have the perfect setting for poetic inspiration (your chisel). I believe we do keep memories of heaven in our heads when we are born. Love the way you progressed until you could discard the chisel. Beautiful sentiments at what awaits at the end of Earthly life! Thanks for pointing this poem out to me, Mark. Excellent writing! Best wishes, carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2020 12:15:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful and memorable reply, Carolyn. I thought you might see parallels with your poem. It is a gentle rain of starlight. A clear night, so vivid that I think I feel the photons of distant stars impacting my head.
Date: 12/27/2018 2:46:00 PM
change marks time but time is not a thing...the now is an active time function...the function is of a wormhole that (in our way of seeing) moves us from one place to another...a past to a future
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Date: 12/27/2018 3:20:00 PM
A thoughtful and inciteful reply. Everything moves at the speed of light—primarily through space or time. We plod along through time and thus are subject to entropy. For energetic beings this might not be so. I’ll forego speghettification for now, if you don’t mind. Anyway, eternity is a very long time—especially towards the end.
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Sand Blown
Date: 12/27/2018 2:49:00 PM
andt...nice write...good feeling

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