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An Old Man's Morning

February cold Back ache and joint pain I am feeling old Not much time remains

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Date: 2/28/2009 1:29:00 PM
Jim, I'm feeling the aches and pains, too. But I want to live life to its fullest, and I hope you will as well. When "Not much time remains," we may as well make the most of it. It's hard for me to believe how such a short verse evoked so much emotion. Very provocative, Carolyn
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