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An Old Man's Elegy

An Old Man's Elegy All the people went home; There was no place to go. Shadows laughingly mocked them, As they made their way home in the snow. They sold the old man's house, To the highest bid. When the gavel came down, It sealed the final nail on the lid. The poor man ruminated By day and by night. The townspeople had done him wrong; And there was no way to change the wrong to a right. Something sinister ensued, that terrible night; And nothing could ever make things the same. One by one, in the shadows of night, His final elegy in state, to clear his good name. Morning broke early in the fog and the mist. He had slept in the wood completely alone. For all his righteous sins this old grieving man - He would wholly atone. You see what he did was to pay them threefold; In precious gems and a handful of gold. He told them his house was his life and his home; Never again would they sell it nor would he ever to roam. May 20, 2016 Contest: Any Poem You Ever Wrote NOT for A Contest

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Date: 7/14/2016 9:21:00 PM
This has an air of mystery to it. Great write, R.A.! Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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R.A. Marschall
Date: 7/14/2016 10:38:00 PM
Kim, Thank you so much for reading. Appreciate your kind comment!
Date: 7/14/2016 10:00:00 AM
Very haunting and interesting write. Congratulations on the win... and having been featured.
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Date: 7/14/2016 8:55:00 PM
Carol, Thank you! The poem was intentionally written to present a bit of mystery and intrigue.
Date: 6/25/2016 7:40:00 AM
Ruben O. The poem was only submitted one time. I did edit it to make a revision, although this should not have changed the placement. It was featured as the Poem of the Week by Poetry Soup. Appreciate your read.
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Date: 5/31/2016 3:39:00 AM
I'm impressed and touched by this poem, Richard. Shrouded in mystery, curiously musing on what happened prior to this. ~ Welcome to Soup. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/21/2016 12:52:00 AM
Richard Marschall, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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