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An Old Man Gives Birth

They come of their own accord-- they cannot be forced, will not yield to demands, entreaties, not even begging.... Why I ask, on waking up after a 35 year long nap, did the poems again begin dancing merrily in my old, old head-- I might as well ask why I am alive, or why God likes to hide His face .... Old man that I am, I am happy when I give birth to them, each near perfect in my eyes-- lovely to behold: a little bundle of joy I want to share with a very busy and very, very confused world.... Forgive me, please, my parental pride

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Date: 1/11/2023 10:27:00 AM
LJ - Congratulations on your win with this delightful poem on the journey of the poet!! It is so wonderful to see your name on the winners list! You and your elegant poems on life's journey have been missed! You always bring a great perspective to life. So happy to see this on the winners list. Happy New Year. Blessings to you my friend.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/12/2023 5:03:00 AM
Thank you Sam--very much appreciated!!! I was quite busy towards the end of last year putting together my 3rd collection, 'Soul Songs', which my trade publisher released before Christmas. May you and yours have a very blessed 2023!
Date: 1/5/2023 4:12:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/5/2023 7:55:00 AM
Thank you, Beata, and a most blessed 2023 for you and yours as well!
Date: 1/3/2023 6:46:00 PM
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing ~ warmest congratulations on your win
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/4/2023 6:52:00 PM
Thank you!!!
Date: 12/6/2016 1:49:00 AM
I forgive you your parental pride, it is such a recognizable sweet poem, I love it, congratulations!
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Date: 11/27/2016 9:07:00 AM
Such an inward look into your passion. "...I might as/well/ask why I am alive,/or why/God likes to hide/ his face..." I particularly enjoy this -- this has so much depth to it, yet undresses the innocence that I find so intriguing about this poem. Great poem and congratulations. -- Wesley C.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/27/2016 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, Wesley, for your thought -provoking review;you actually made me appreciate my own poem more!
Date: 8/15/2014 9:28:00 AM
The title of your poem gives a unique metaphorical tone to it. The body also blends well with the title. Congrats to your win! :-)
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Date: 8/14/2014 6:13:00 PM
Grats on your win:) Keep writing it is a wonderful thing
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Date: 8/12/2014 7:23:00 AM
Awesome write Ien ,, congrats in huge win!
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Date: 8/12/2014 7:10:00 AM
I consider my poems to be my babies too - a great write many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/12/2014 6:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "Writing" - sponsored by: Regina Riddle - Really deserved, Len ! -oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/12/2014 4:59:00 AM
Very attractive title, quite meaningful. Len.Congrats on the win
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Date: 2/22/2014 5:37:00 PM
I LOVE this. I too wrote of my poems as children when I wrote My Poems are Children to Me. VERY good poem!
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