An Odd Shaped Heart

. Swan and Gander touch Heads construct an odd shaped heart Love the strangest thing

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Honesty Oimbo

Date: 10/30/2010 6:00:00 AM

THE poem is one of the few good written haiku in the world

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 1:21:00 AM

excellent image here my friend thank you duncan

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/28/2010 3:26:00 PM

enjoyed mom!

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 10/28/2010 8:03:00 AM

Hi Sara.Lovely Haiku.And a beautiful idea from your very creative mind.I understand that swans mate for life with the same partner.I think that's wonderful.Mind you they don't have the stresses and strains of life as we do.For one thing they don't have to pay bills,they only have to touch them!!! Love June

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2010 8:28:00 PM

this one my favorite of the three I read tonight. I have always been fascinated in that heart shape that two long bird necks can make! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/27/2010 6:39:00 AM

Interesting haiku with good images, sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/27/2010 6:23:00 AM

how original and creative.. much enjoyed, sara warmest, nette