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An October Day

The smell of fall is in the air. While gusts of wind blow through my hair. There's nothing better than these days. Long as the wind don't blow you away. The wind picks up the fallen leaves. But its nothing like a summer's breeze. Like a small tornado the wind whips around. The leaves are dancing off the ground. The smell of fall will soon be gone. With later the days 'til mornings dawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/7/2010 6:27:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed turning the pages of your work today and look forward to many more to read...always Michael
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:36:00 PM
excellent
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Debra. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2010 11:10:00 AM
I am stopping in today to thank you for all your wonderful comments Debra. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Do not be nervous about putting you poetry up hon. It is excellent writing and so what if you have a not so good one. The next one will be twice as good. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 6:09:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup, you have great talent my friend!
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Date: 10/27/2010 10:37:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive write..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...I was delighted that you chose to read some of my work..Sara
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