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An Ocean Goodbye

Footprints lead the way to the calm ocean, Left in the sand by the lovers of salty water. The ocean sighs as the tide reaches shore, And as a breath is taken, it slips away once more. As the seagulls sore above the ocean, Two children splash in the tides below. Waves, like dolphins, bounce across the ocean, Slowly diminishing as they make their way to land. As each wave fades after reaching the beach, Seashells-little gifts of the ocean-are now in reach. Footprints cover the sand in search of shells, But the shells soon hide under the tide. Shoes are found, towels are packed, and shells gathered. With hair full of sand, it is time to say a goodbye. They say goodbye, although they wish to bide, And the ocean says goodbye with the wave of the tide. With shells in their pockets and hope in their eyes, They know this is not their last goodbye. Emily Wilson 11/14/15

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Date: 11/18/2015 1:51:00 PM
A lovely and creative interpretation, Emily! Children always have great fun on the beach, and they will surely return! Congrats on your top win. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/18/2015 9:26:00 AM
Wonderful! Congrats.. :) -LU *smiles*
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:01:00 AM
Such a pretty write, congratulations.
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:52:00 PM
Emily, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:46:00 PM
Thank you so very much for composing and submitting a poem in my contest, Emily, congratulations on your win!!! My husband and I truly enjoyed the poem. Hugs dear friend Eve
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Date: 11/17/2015 8:15:00 PM
Well done, Emily...congratulations.
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Date: 11/17/2015 6:53:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 11/17/2015 6:52:00 PM
Congratulations Emily
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Date: 11/17/2015 6:12:00 PM
such wonderful imagery congrats on your win Emily:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2015 11:08:00 PM
Emily, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/15/2015 12:11:00 PM
Hi Emily, this is such an excellent piece, packed with imagery, that makes me look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/14/2015 7:14:00 PM
WOW, the first wave I ever read like this. Emily, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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