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An Ocean Between the Fire

fire in the ocean burning, searing hotter than the sun but amongst the flame inside the embers a dark ocean has waves taller than the fires blaze, the dark waters hold oceans hold inlets hold seas and in these waters lie shadows of the seize

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Date: 11/28/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "You Pick Again" contest Jesse. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2011 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "MIX" contest Jesse. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2011 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jesse.Very nice poem.
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Date: 11/26/2011 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jesse
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Date: 11/26/2011 2:15:00 AM
JESSE,, CONGRATULATIONS... ON YOUR WIN.. THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORT..ALWAYS,..P.D.
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