An Invitation To Betrayal Sapphic Stanza

AN INVITATION TO BETRAYAL Felt the tickling of spring upon my upturned face Felt the thunder-beating of my unfaithful heart Took the outstretched hand that sought to guide me into bliss; Sweetly I fell….. Victoria Anderson-Throop 2013

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Kathryn Collins

Date: 4/23/2013 7:38:00 AM

Such feeling, Victoria. You sure made my heart jump. love, Kathy

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/13/2013 10:36:00 AM

this is truly wonderful poetry, Victoria,

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 4/15/2013 7:34:00 PM

coming from you , Harry--this is heartfelt thanks....by the way, I am discovering a great affinity for this form...just when I was turning my back on writing poetry....i am hooked again!

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 4/12/2013 3:23:00 PM

"Felt the thunder-beating of my unfaithful heart". Great images, great lines.

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 4/15/2013 7:40:00 PM

thanks for reading, Ndaba---an especially I appreciate it when someone cites lines that they like/dislike...it helps me understand if I am 'reaching' someone--I like this image you cited, too.. please keep in touch! Victoria

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2013 4:21:00 PM

love this one, Vic - I've only ever tried this form once and really liked it : )