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An Incomplete Wish

I remember when you first waved to me, I remember when you first asked me out on a date, I remember when you first called me beautiful, I remember when you first said "i love you" to me, I remember how i trembled when you first touched my lips, I remember when you promised me that you will never leave me, I remember when you said- "you and me forever and ever". Now i sit all alone,waiting for you, Thinking about all the promises you made, Where have you gone love? I miss you more and more with each passing breath, Not a day passes without me thinking about you, I crave for you touch,your smile,your kiss and your intoxicating voice. I wish for the old times again, I wish you had never left my side, I wish i could grow old with you I wish i could die lying in your arms, Alas! I fear my wish will only remain a wish. I wish...... #brokenheart lover.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/20/2016 9:07:00 AM
nice to see this one again
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Date: 1/17/2016 5:40:00 AM
Beautifully expressed but this made me sad.....
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Date: 12/20/2015 1:18:00 PM
Hi, Sahiba, this is a deep read. love it. SKAT
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Date: 6/5/2013 9:11:00 AM
Hi Sahiba. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 5/28/2013 8:10:00 AM
Welcome to poetry-Soup!and nice write.
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Date: 5/28/2013 3:42:00 AM
wonderful write keep penning such painful moments, some shall wash out their hearts reading them and you shall feel lighter after dairying your poem
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:33:00 AM
Sahiba, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2013 4:52:00 PM
Excellent poetry....thanks for posting...now let's have more....
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Date: 5/27/2013 12:04:00 PM
Love this Sahiba! Keep up?
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