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An Illusion

I saw yonder this brazen sky leaning over to kiss the demure earth. I ran toward that conjunction to join this blissful union and be in perfect accord with Nature: To bloom like a flower Or twinkle like a star! I ran ran in sheer madness ran in sheer delight, A strange sensation spreading over me, Lifting me high high in the sky. Tears of joy welled up in my tired eyes and I saw this dull world in a celestial perspective. But I went on and on… Now distressed and spent, A step further, I collapsed – Lost and defeated. ~"Sky" contest by Anthony Slausen "Simply Beautiful" contest by Kelly Deschler

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Date: 4/20/2015 12:10:00 PM
Great opening stanza! I like your stuff, man--you got soul! len carber
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/23/2015 5:27:00 PM
Thanks, man--you got heart! Appreciate your comments.
Date: 4/12/2015 3:10:00 AM
Abdul, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/6/2015 10:54:00 AM
Amazing, Abdul...much to think about in your words. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/6/2015 11:06:00 AM
Thanks Sandra.
Date: 4/6/2015 9:45:00 AM
Wow!!!! You leave me speechless! Congratulations on your win! A Fav!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/6/2015 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Maurice. Appreciate much.
Date: 4/5/2015 7:44:00 PM
An enchanting poem filled with wonderful imagery, though those last few lines were just heartbreaking... Congrats on your win, Abdul!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/6/2015 10:36:00 AM
Thanks Kelly. Glad you liked it.

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