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An Ice Storm

Winter is slamming my lovely town with an ice storm, giving it a resemblance of an alpine village not nestled in pines, but with bigtooth aspens so tall; I should be at work today, not wallowing in rage. The backyard trees are weighed down by the icy snow, and they are about to break; using caution is to avoid a death-trap... even a red-breasted blackbird uses intuition. Winter is slamming my lovely town with an ice storm; it once was so sunny with kids ridings on rolling skates, before this dreadful wheather stepped in to punish them all, taking charge and bringing, with its wrath, drastic changes. Plenty of snow to shovel, until late night with a will so reluctant; my head hurts and my nose runs and sneezing is frequent... I have a cold, and the remedy is tea with lemon and honey, do you have any suggestions how to end my misery? Winter is slamming my lovely town with an ice storm, repulsing spring's advances, and February is a reputed villain conspiring, not making concessions; impassive and imposing on a love-sick's kindness, worsening his stress.... to deny him empathy, embattling itself and not restoring calmness.

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Date: 2/27/2010 12:27:00 PM
Hey Andrew, this is goood! So very sorry about being caught in all this snow. We've been there too, quite recently, in fact, so I can relate. Try to relax, though it is difficult...you can't fight it, anyway. Drink lots of tea and try to keep warm. God bless... Great write as usual. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/26/2010 4:32:00 PM
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Date: 2/26/2010 12:24:00 PM
Right with u Andrew on this wonderful descriptive poem.. the snow is still falling here as we are shoveling and I have the same scenario in my back yard with the trees.. it is now a dangerous scene.. I feel your misery my friend.. Summer cannot get here fast enough... whatever did we do to wreak this havoc upon the East Coast? expressing it in poetry has made it seem beautiful with your words.. thankxxx..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/26/2010 10:16:00 AM
For some parts of the US (and European countries as well) this has been the worst winter in modern times. You express well the desire to see "sunny" days again, Andrew! Hope this is winter's last gasp. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2010 9:56:00 AM
Yeah, father winter is in his prime right now.... He is punishing me as well.... Good work my friend......:JP]
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