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An Existing Half

I thought I was born a perfect all, With many things at my beck and call. Days went by and I became me I thought it was all I wanted to be. I turned forty and looked back To see the other half I still lack. My whole life has been a half, Of an all I feel not enough. As I age and approach my timely end, The other half, my Lord prepares to send.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/28/2013 5:50:00 AM
Yes, there is that perfect half for you out there..Enjoyed reading your creative work.Sara
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Omar Jabak
Date: 10/28/2013 5:56:00 AM
Thank you, Sara, for your kind compliment. I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
Date: 10/28/2013 4:44:00 AM
Indeed somewhere she must exist though u might b late. A super rhyming excellent poem, great flow too! Pls coment my latest poem. (indian i am).
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Omar Jabak
Date: 10/28/2013 4:53:00 AM
Thank you for your nice comment. I will read your poem and leave a comment.

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