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An Exciting Adventure

Hiking was an exciting adventure, climbing mountains piercing a summer's sky, not looking back for the fear of falling, or think, " I'll die. " but my grip had a formidable strength to entice texture. I advanced as an army in a clashing battle field without a cloud, stepping on sweet Williams hosting butterflies without thinking of their agony; and hearing an eagle swoop, I ducked as the rope around my wrist tightened, stopping my blood's flow...I felt that sense of vulnerability.

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Date: 9/8/2012 11:02:00 AM
love to hike nice imagery in this one thanks for sharing keep on sharing enjoyed the read
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