Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

An Epic Battle With A Simple Question

Edward McCormick Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled An Epic Battle With A Simple Question which was written by poet Edward McCormick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Edward McCormick

Best Edward Mccormick Poems

+ Fav Poet

An Epic Battle With A Simple Question

A beautiful heart pines from afar. To parallel freedom, we choose our master. In Love, the Dragon and Unicorn are! Celestial winged heart beats faster, Over mountain and ocean meet polar eyes. To parallel freedom, we choose our master. Embarking from sun brewed and moonshine skies Two alien races, in war, collide. Over mountain and ocean meet polar eyes. All brothers' swords raise, marching with pride. Sisters of heaven let feathers fly. Two alien races, in war, collide. The angered clouds rain blood from the sky. A new path finally found. Sisters of heaven let feathers fly. Brothers' swords low now to the ground. A beautiful heart pines from afar. A new path finally found. In Love, the Dragon and Unicorn are! In universe Out bound energy Where are we when we die?

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 1:04:00 PM
    wow Edward, your poem is awesome... and the ending has me in thoughts now....always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:58:00 PM
    I sure like the image of a dragon and unicorn together. Cool!! And I see this won in the contest. Way to go!!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:48:00 AM
    Edward, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:13:00 AM
    Edward congrats on your win, I loved this write, very thought provoking...David

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Edward xx

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 1:07:00 AM
    Whoa Edward! This is awesome! Every part of it! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:12:00 PM
    This is a great fantasy Edward :D congrats on your win too :D

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:48:00 PM
    Edward.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser " contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:58:00 PM
    Adding this to my favorites to say the least- WELL DESERVED win! :)

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:46:00 PM
    Congrads on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:38:00 PM
    Great write Edward, congrats on your special win xxx

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 6:56:00 PM
    Well done, congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Excellent write!

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 9:28:00 AM
    Wow, this is so well done. I love your writing style. Assuming this is for Richard's contest - Good luck! :)

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 6:09:00 PM
    Good questions..where are we when we are alive? ;) Light & Love

    McCormick Avatar Edward McCormick
    Date: 1/2/2013 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie! I think PoetrySoup may just be the answer to both our questions! ~E=mc²