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An Emptiness Inside

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An Emptiness Inside

~An Emptiness Inside~

Right now I'm sitting here
Staring into space
Feeling so all alone

As tears begin to fill my eyes
And I begin to cry
My heart suddenly feels an emptiness inside
That here lately I just cannot hide

If only you were here to hold me,
I'd feel so protected...
With you by my side

My world feels so sad and blue
Feeling as though I'm forever going to lose you
Our love I thought was forever true?

You told me just the other night
That I was only a simple friend
I then began to believe that our relationship
Was only just pretend

I've pleaded with you to help make
This relationship of ours last
Baby, I beg of you...
Let's not dwell on the past

I'm so sorry if I have hurt you
But never forget my love for you
Was always true

Baby, I pray that I can 
Mend your broken heart
But for now I will continue to look forward
Day by day
Pray continually...
That we never, ever drift apart

Copyright © Karla Deal

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  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:11:00 PM
    This poem was a gentle ride through both sides of relationship.....your words are so tender they must be sincere and of the nicest poems I have read in awhile.

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 9/21/2013 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well thank you Wayne for your kind words of my poem. That means a lot. Have a GREAT weekend!! :) Karla~
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 6:39:00 AM
    How often that plead goes out to the ones we truly love. Your words are beautiful. I like it Karla.

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 2:07:00 PM
    This is surely a beautiful write! I am glad that I came to read your work today! Thank you for sharing this tremendous poem! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 8/28/2013 2:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awwww...thank you Russell, or may I call you Russ? Your kind words regarding my poem put a smile on my face. :) Thank you SO MUCH!!! Karla~