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an emotion

I don't understand
I feel half numb maybe I'm going mad
Anger corrupting and errupting bad thoughts
And nurturing faults
Confused to the point of exhaust
Swirling like in a drain....I'm lost
More calamity trailing along with it apathy
Savagely grasping my sanity 
I can hear it kicking and screaming drastically
Lavishing in the the recesses of a tapestry woven out of catastrophy
Ravishing the idea of peace once again
When all the pieces fit 
Now I feel the cracks and slips as I trip over these hurdles 
Life's virtue
It's amazing how deep little things will hurt

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  1. Date: 5/24/2011 9:12:00 AM
    great piece eddie.. super lines of creativity ..luv your vocab in this piece luv.. your last line is awesome and true.. luv..

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 7:18:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. It was a very interesting write. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Eddie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:29:00 AM