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An Elephant Walking In Wildflowers

I try to walk very gently through a field filled with wildflowers Not crushing them under my feet takes a short walk many hours On hot days I flap my ears over them to give out a slight breeze If not for me they would dry up for this field doesn’t have trees Lots of bees and butterflies continually dance around my head Getting stung or one flying up my trunk is a thing I daily dread I am blessed with having such freedom and plenty of space to roam Concrete floors and iron bars is sadly what some elephants call home Author Eileen Clark

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Date: 9/9/2022 6:02:00 PM
Dear Eileen, the gratitude your elephant feels is expressed so beautifully. I delighted in your wonderful imagery and lingered over your poignant last line. Splendid poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Eileen Clark
Date: 9/10/2022 11:59:00 AM
Hi Susan, thank you for the wonderful comment, best regards.
Date: 9/8/2022 6:21:00 AM
Delightful poetry, Eileen!
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Eileen Clark
Date: 9/10/2022 12:01:00 PM
Hello Franci, thank you for very nice comment.
Date: 7/28/2022 8:46:00 AM
A bee up your trunk would definitely be unpleasant. I enjoyed your cute elephant poem Eileen. John
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Eileen Clark
Date: 7/29/2022 9:46:00 AM
Thank you John

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