An Autumn Morning

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~An Autumn Morning~ (Tanka/Senryu) The suns shining now Night has come and gone away Nice October morn To enjoy a walk outside Before it gets hot again Weather started change Summer's gone, and fall has come There's chill in the air. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 October.22.2015

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Fayaz Bhat

Date: 10/24/2015 4:32:00 AM

Beautiful! Baby Dori. Just beautiful.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/26/2015 12:50:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly,Fayaz, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, comments and all:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Tim Smith

Date: 10/22/2015 2:09:00 PM

Beautiful Dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/26/2015 12:47:00 AM

Thank you so kindly,Tim, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, comments and all:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D