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An Autumn Alouette

Chrysanthemums bloom Destroying the gloom From the summer’s finale As leaves start to change Building moods so strange All is felt with the entry A cool breeze whispers Filled with fine answers To all the doubts that occur With the fading time The seasonal crime Of leaving the past leisure September 1, 2014 For: A Lovely Alouette Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 9/15/2014 4:08:00 PM
Lovely lines on Autumn, and I enjoyed this one in my contest. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 9/15/2014 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations Regina on your amazing poem.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:43:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations it is lovely to read this again Regina:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2014 6:50:00 AM
Wow the seasonal crime of leaving the past leisure! What a superb write Regina! Congrats on huge win dear!
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Date: 9/2/2014 9:38:00 AM
Lovely, my dear. I loved your choice of words here. This is a difficult one to write for...I'm feeling stumped. You've pulled it off with finesse. Hugs
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/3/2014 1:01:00 AM
Thank you!!!! I appreciate your encouragement. Hugs to you to. Love and prayers, Gina
Date: 9/1/2014 10:40:00 PM
beautiful imagery of the flower's beauty fading as the seasons change. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/1/2014 11:13:00 PM
Thank you with love and prayers, Gina

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