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"an Attempt To Write"

I see people but i can't see myself i see parts of their pain and mine is almost the same I think life isn't sane we're all just a bunch of grain making this whole world rain leaving, all that remains one droplet of our souls behind A memory of us that falls onto one long line embedded and weaved out from time seeking a new life burning up minds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/5/2010 9:00:00 PM
I think the same thing some times, but not nearly as poetically as you. This is really amazing.
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