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"An Attempt to Write"

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Below is the poem entitled "An Attempt to Write" which was written by poet Dominic Magofna. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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"An Attempt to Write"

I see
but i can't see
i see
parts of their
and mine is
almost the 
I think
life isn't
we're all
a bunch of
this whole world
leaving, all that remains
one droplet of
our souls behind
A memory of us
 that falls onto one 
long line
embedded and weaved
out from time
seeking a new life
burning up minds

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  1. Date: 11/5/2010 9:00:00 PM
    I think the same thing some times, but not nearly as poetically as you. This is really amazing.